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itne door ho ke bhi paas ho,
ek naya ehsaas ho,
tumhe kya pata,
tumhi to meri saans ho.
pal pal hasta hoon tumhe khwaabo mein soch ke
pal pal rota ho kyonki aaj tum paas nahin
yaadein to meri hi hain
ab is duniya mein aur kisi ki aas nahin.

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Shayon said…
Don't tell me you fell in love!
raj alakshendra said…
gandhi, u r in love !!! people write these type of beautiful lines during love only ..
(well i havnt written myself till date)
reply our query soon ...

and if u r really in love , we all can help u ... to get the girl in i can help u , to maintain the relationship shayon is there ....
Karma said…
Oye ! Jio Gandhi..another self-made verse on LOVE by a top-floorer.So this is literally a Season for Love then.Kool

Sam has already made some tune out of it...... ;-)

Salud!
Gandhi is in love.Can't stop laughing!
Ankit said…
@dearest friends...keep guessing...

thank you very much!!
@Gandhi

What is there to guess in this ?
Another unrequited love,I'm sure! :-D
I didn't understand the poem in its entirety, but I got the jist of it. And my suspesions were confirmed when I scrolled through the comments!
Anyway, Raj! Why do you think the G-man needs our help in getting the girl! That's his prerogative and right to prove that he can win her over himself!
And Mann, even you've felt unrequited love at least once in your life. You should better than to make fun of him for it!
And G-man, go for it!
Lol. That was Dion espousing Gandhi's "cause". :-D
@Dion,
I have a strong feeling that you're in love ! ;-D
@ Mann!
Aren't we all? With something/someone or the other?

;P

D
Shayon said…
I think Dino expressed my very sentiments, in his words.
raj alakshendra said…
atleast dion is in love with G-man :)
& shayon is getting sentimental ... wow ... so sweet ...

@dion
k .. dude i wont help him ... let he prove himself ... happy happy :)

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