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The last one I swear..........No more after this




Elated by the flattering response from his fellow bloggers..Karma has now delved deep into his pile of word Docs to find another of his rejects...a far more murkier stuff.

Conceived in a delirious state ,without a sense of purpose and with an utter detest for the hole-like-cubicle he works in, while sipping coffee , gazing at the bleak looking world outside from the glassed confine of his office building.

Hope u detest it as much as he did while penning it down...................


Claustrophobic



It's a lonely world outta there
Nobody seems to notice you
The world seems to collapse in
Yes I am a part of this too

The sky looks dull , the people so small
Thru the window I do often see
A lull of silence prevails out side
An eerie of numbness yet a strange tranquility

This bizarre remoteness befells upon me
There's a heavy desolation in my heart
My forlorn soul seeks for some solace
Listless do I trudge thu this dreary desert

Comments

Sakshi said…
Its awesome...!!!
Shayon said…
@ Karma
I guess you are spurring the want of writing poetries in my heart too :-P
Unknown said…
@karma

hey you become a different person inside the office!! nice stuff..

dont you worry, next day on i'll give you pings at regular intervals to break into your 'bizzare remoteness' ;-)

njoy..
Ankit said…
ultimate....hey write somemore i`ll use stuff for my cat prep....
Wow!! Believe me those were some really awsm lines man!!!
It's times better than the last one it's just perfect!!! & please dont make it the last one as long as u can come up wid this gud stuff!!
However the title "Claustrophobic" aint gud.. Something like "Stranger in the mirror" or "Loneliness of a long distance runner" (a Maiden song) or best "Isolation"(original)would be better
Keep rocking..
Sakshi said…
Ok, Starnger in the Morror is too sidney sheldon...!!!
@Hahaha
Gud G.K maam!!! :-)
raj alakshendra said…
@ karma

a poet in the making

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